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just different 1 min read 739 views Aug 8, 2016

Some angels disliked utopia...

Think about this...
Lucifer was an angel in utopia, yet he was still pissed,
And challenged God, taking 1/3 of heaven's population (with him) in a coup,
If 33% of angels didn't like heaven, what will you do?
Were the other 67% just afraid?
Or were they not up for the challenge and promise of change?
Sometimes it is good to break the rules,
Other times, it is best to stick with the flock, or you might lose!
 

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The Immortal Wize

It's true power in your words, reminding of that age old question. ...What would you do if you weren't afraid?

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after vision

my poet, the intent of poetry is to engage the mind - you stir the pot just right

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WarriorCarryingWater

Thanks Wize Dom and after vision!

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hymnagen

I'm stuffed with this food for thought. Very deep musing. I digz

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WarriorCarryingWater

Thanks hymnagen!

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love_supreme

This is really something to think about. Excellent write.

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Thanks latin_lover!

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jlmoore2

Hmmmm! Very thought provoking.

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