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life 1 min read 618 views Aug 31, 2016

The Aching

Physical pain

Does not remain

Emotional pain

Sustains

It hammers

Driving in

A point

Keeps us out

Of joint

Broken in places

Bones never mend

Feeling helplessly

Doomed

To theses

Moods

Hurt so much

One would say

“I didn’t even hit you that hard”

Without knowing that

All it took was a touch

 

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catmartan

Awesome keep us thinking !!!

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Bravo!! Such flare.. Never disappoints, I guess that's what double rubies do.. Your mind and poetry is a treasure..

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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