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life 1 min read 541 views Sep 3, 2016

Forever casted away

I come to you with this aching heart pulsating throughout my body numbing every piece of clear space in my mind though i try to tell myself things will be alright the deepest inside of me knows the emptiness that will forever stand the test of time, does love come with such powers as to undue every fiber of my bein leaving me in a hopeless despair falling short of every breath chasing the tears waiting in my eyes never to fall, because that may be the last of straws to drop my final heartbeat sitting on the edge of my mind, begging to be set free amongst the darkest of places never to see the light of a left lovers smile crushing all hopes of a change of heart as pitiful words echo, "I'll always love you!" lies told to those taking but never giving. In truth its more, I'll never love you again, but you I will never forget. Forever casted away.

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StarMarie

I'm sorry, it sounds like you've lost a love of yours /: Incredible imagery

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kavindra

the darkness , the empty hole left from a loss filling in the hole is what is attempted but getting it out is what actually happens

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kavindra

very vivid and flowing read

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