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trouncing fields of dreams

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trouncing fields of dreams

 

like locusts

swarming innocent crops     

in their prime

we likewise slaughter

our fields of dreams

as well as moral pride—

idle consciousness

impervious to the nipping

of the shoots

of chosen buds of youth

trounced

in the fields of our streets.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Expressed very well!
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, Poet Wize and love_supreme. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Charles2 says:

Riding the gauntlet...the meanness of the streets circa 2021 AD. the onslaught continues. the road to glory, unfazed, for the few.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, C2. The syndromed oppressed still doing the oppressors' continued work. Peace and Love.

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