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life 1 min read 593 views Sep 28, 2016

A little bit loud

too many families
torn apart
too many strings attached
too many loose strings
too many knots to tie
every day is like a funeral
not a dry eye
somebodies always crying
too many issues
not enough tissue
to go around
children screaming
like little demons
single mothers
 having meltdowns
forced to put the belt down
anxiety caused by society
begging and pleading
for help
she can't save her babies
she can't see a way out
so she forms a bad habit
let's take a crack at it
now she's crack addict
sobered up and back at it
a bad,  Bad habit
so she cries out
the only way she knows how
she has not smiled in a while
she's not the only one
who feels this doom
there are others in the room
about to break
don't know how much more
they can take
in need of a way out
an escape
no help from family
no support
no help from the court
she's underneath
smoking PCP
that wet, that water
CPS took her daughter
depopulation is nothing
but, slaughter

 

 

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