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life 1 min read 617 views Sep 28, 2016

The Minnow's

this is dedicated to the
THUG LIFE
we all want a, love life
but, how can we love life
when we can't, trust life
when life, gives us nothing
but, hardships and hard time
blamed for all crimes
when I was little
I watched TV
when GOODTIMES
was canceled
THE EVANS
were still struggling
to be free
The Minnow, may have been
lost but Gilligan, got off the island
James died
can I get a moment of silence
Michael Joined a gang
will things, ever changed
J.J sold drugs
Thelma's husband
got drunk and
gave her a backhand
Wallonia was full of bologna
she was sleeping with
Florida's husband
say she wasn't?
every time she came in
with messed up hair
James, wasn't there
all Florida did for her kids
is pray for God, to make away
and, I bet she would, have
died that way, if the record
continued to play
 

 

 

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