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life 1 min read 738 views Sep 28, 2016

Wiggle the Riddle

tried to hold me
couldn't keep me
the drinks were free
couldn't sleep me
snuck up behind me
couldn't sneak me
slept on the floor
couldn't sweep we
couldn't be brine
if you pickled me
fly into rage
if you tickle me
I'm not fickle
just
a little spicy
like a Wickle
that's a Hot pickle
Peter Piper Picked
before Jack jumped over
the candle stick
and went holding hands
with Jill, up a hill
he broke his crown
I guess when he fell down
the bean stalk
then he sat in a corner
 eating a plum pie
with his thumb
on Christmas day
Jack be nimble
Jack be quick
Jack must be tired
coz, Jack did a lot of sh!t

 

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my poet, I love the spirit of this - Jack tired now

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