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life 1 min read 551 views Sep 29, 2016

Dear Crisee

happy birthday Crystal I got you the pistol hope you don't miss.. tho here's your cake blow out the candles "YOU NEED TO CUT IT" let me give you a hand help you plate it you're 16 now, glad you made it this far, now you get a car do you know, you're a star an Indigo, you shine like gold don't be lazy, quick to have babies that boy might have rabies you're just a baby yourself concentrate on your wealth you don't have to, follow in your mamas, footsteps believe me, it's not safe concrete, jus saying its not a safe, walkway don't want you to fall build a strong wall like you built a bear remember when it got, thrown on the roof its still up there, stand tall stable enough not to fall if you need help, if anybody hurts you, call me instead I'm not stable in the head I don't need a reason it don't have to be, hunting season too old to fight I can sit in, prison for the rest of my life coz, all I do is write

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after vision

my poet, so much in this write that engulfs real life

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