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Good love vs Bad Love Part I

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23yrs into life they meet:A surge of energy shot through them like a bolt of lightening and they knew it was love at first site!
50yrs into marriage:When he looks at her he doesn’t see the 50plus pounds she gained over the years, the now fully gray head of hair or that her face holds so many wrinkles it would put a Shar pei to shame. What he see’s is the only woman who still makes his nature rise.
When she looks at him she doesn’t see the missing teeth, the MPB (male pattern baldness), the six pack that’s now a keg. She doesn’t notice his foul breath that smells like 85% of his organs has decomposed. She looks at him and still gets goose bumps, still feel that tingling sensation between her legs and she blushes!
2yrs after recovery:She walks pass him, what he wants to do is grab her by the arm, sit her on his lap and kiss her passionately. But he fears he may cause a setback to the hip she recently got replaced, he settles for a pinch on her butt. She blushes while swatting at his hand and says “Now, don’t start a fire you can’t put out!” then she winks at him.
1yr into illness:There is nothing more that can be done, he’s dying. She sits by his hospital bedside as she has been doing ever since he was admitted 3 weeks ago. She sings his favorite songs, washes his face, fluffs his pillows and helps him eat.
3:48pm:She waits in the recovery room for him to awaken……he never does.
6:15pm:She finally allows her children to take her home.
7:45pm:The family has gathered at her home to mourn and reminisce on the good times they shared with him.
8:02pm:The daughter asked no one in particular “Where is mom?” Her brother says “I think she’s still in the kitchen trying to keep busy.”
8:15pm:The daughter decides to go see if her mom needs any help. She finds her sitting in his favorite chair in the sunroom listening to music off his old record player. There’s a smile on her face as soulful R&B music by Earth, Wind, and Fire fills the air.
The daughter says “Awwww, I remember this song, I used to sneak down stairs late at night and watch you and daddy dancing!” The daughter noticed that she wasn’t saying anything.
8:45pm:911 was called, paramedics pronounced her dead at the scene. Cause of death; massive heart attack/ aka a broken heart.
9:00pm ….She is, once again, in his arms.
God created love will last beyond a life time…

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after vision says:

I loved this as I did on yesterday with the other version my poet

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Lovelylady1 says:

Thank you my king. I haven't been on this site but a few days, since then I have become a fan of your poetic thought process. I'm honored that you like my pen!

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