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Hello Heartbreak

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Hello Heartbreak...I see you!

You're more dependable than my best friend.

More faithful than any man.

More devastating than a great disaster; with more outcries than all my laughters.

Love lifts me up but, you quickly bring me down.

Scares left on my heart reminds me that you've been around.

You fill my stomach with so much pain, I can't eat.

You plaque my mind so often, I can't sleep!

The weight of your presence sits heavily on my lungs, I can't breathe.

A constant reminder that in your works, you're well pleased.

Your below the belt punches hurts so bad; I can't stand it!!!

But guess what Heartbreak?????   I'M STILL STANDING!

Truly not yours, LL1

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
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The Immortal Wize says:

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LP45 says:

Great write LovelyLady1. Thanks for sharing.

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Lovelylady1 says:

I've been trying to figure out how to thank everyone individually but I guess I can't so I'll just call you out 1 by 1. Love_supreme ... thank you for your reading/commenting. Wize...thank you for the expression of enjoyment LP45... Queen, it was my pleasure
 

King Suspire says:

This was really well written cause it hit home. Thanks for sharing this.

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King Suspire says:

This was really well written cause it hit home. Thanks for sharing this.
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Lovelylady1 says:

King Suspire, I think that for a large majority this hits home, Thank you for confirming it!
 

Chris says:

Very Nice, Well Written

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Lovelylady1 says:

Thank you Chris, I'm glad that you enjoyed it 😀

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