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life 1 min read 551 views Oct 2, 2016

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thought about love

a thousand times

though my hearts

been broke in a million

pieces it's possible

to fall in love again

I just don't have enough

faith in me to believe

in something that is

taken for granted

and, so misunderstood

by so many others like me

in the beginning it was

something so beautiful

felt so wonderful

to be in love, for the

first time, much like

the first high, as time

continues to past

we find ourselves

alone again, and the pain

oh, the pain, the pain

is like something we

never, ever felt before

we want to get past

the hurting, we don't

want to hurt anymore

but, love is so irresistible

we felt so inseparable

in the beginning, knowing

that, somewhere in the

middle it must end

 

 

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