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life 1 min read 624 views Oct 4, 2016

Shambles

got me
feeling like a villain
trying to be
The Hero
can't make it
home
batting Zero
didn't mean to
try and change
your mood,
you earned
your attitude
I was rude to
intervene
when I came
running
to your rescue
thought I
heard you scream
you didn't need
my help
you were doing
just fine
thought I was
helping you out
of a bind
you looked at me
like I was going
out of my mind
I am half the time
getting on your
nerves, spitting
all this verse
it's a curse
" OCD"
I have to rhyme
not all the time
most of the time
I hang a left
when I
should've
hung aright
if I'm a villain
got you tied to
the tracks
screaming
 let me up
let me up
I can't do that
can't let you go
but, I can't
 let you know
you got me
on the ropes
throwing body
 punches
still standing
thanks to
crunches
every time
 I interfere
with a damsel
 in distress
wound up
making a
big mess
have go back
and clean up
trying to find
my way
through
the thickness
between us

 

 

 

 

 

 

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When savior is in your nature, but they don't wanna be saved...whatcha gonna do? Fiyah flow, Wize Peace

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