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amin901
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Live and learn.Learn and apply.Apply and overcome.

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Entrapment

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Im passing time,but as i sit here with a focus in mind,i see you with my eyes and now my focus has become comprimised.I can't sustain my vision in mind.Your looks arised and your beauty has robbed me.Came in like a thief and deprived me and now my sight and my sound is fighting to be free.Fighting to be and it's harder to see.Its harder to stay at attention.And my view is at the descretion of you beauty,your duty,which is to steal my eyes,my mind and now i lye concinplating my escape.

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after vision says:

my poet, we can all but hope to be caught in a web so sweet

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amin901 says:

Nice advice

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