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life 1 min read 576 views Oct 12, 2016

Loss One

sometimes death is like
a miracle often we are in
shock and aw, when it happens
as if we didn't know it would
knowing full well it could
fall down on us  like rain
at any given time, as if we
have time, still that don't
 help the way we feel, when
 it's all said and  done, we go
 to sleep and fake the wake
time don't tick, it just fades away
always with one of us in mind

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mrmelody7

Great one I truly agree

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LP45

Awesome work wize dom. Thank you for sharing.

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