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Fighting back tears

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I wish you could see 
This breaking heart 
How its being torn into 
A million pieces 
When I try to reflect 
On the thought of almost losing you
Watching life come close 
To escaping you 
Cries wailing all around me 
And all I could do was to scream 
Scream out your name 
In disbelief and pain 
But you still remain 
Revealing the fighter 
That bleeds inside you 
I stay here with tears 
Almost escaping my eyes 
Trying to fight them back 
Cause man do not cry 
But they escape me 
The pain is too much to fathom
Tell me you will rise and conquer 
Prove to me that I
Am the living sporn of a fighter 
That the blood the cruises 
Inside me giving me life 
Is your fighting spirit 
Tell me it calls out to you 
And gives you life 
For if I could I would lay down 
Mine for your own 

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The Immortal Wize says:

Sincerely, beautiful at the same time quite sad...True feelings very well conveyed.

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poetunleashed says:

Wize Dom thank you very much for your feedback

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