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life 2 min read 697 views Oct 14, 2016

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she said while you were away thoughts run, through my head, about that day she said I had a little company heard me crying came over and comforted me Don't trip she almost slipped back from along vacation answered the door to a situation "WUZUP"? nothin much, need yo couch took a pillow and blanket had me guessing and thinking turn off the light, said good night by the time, I reached the top of the stairs something didn't sit right she said who was that at the door so and so, sleeping on the floor she said, oh is everything... alright don't know, didn't ask staring at the ceiling feeling like my life, is turning, inside my heart burning, I needed a TUM sum kind of remedy still staring at the ceiling wondering why, I still had that feeling next day the guest is gone we're home alone she's by my side and, I'm feeling so all alone something went wrong while, I was gone Ring she picks up the phone you know who's on the other line I'm watching TV wondering why, the call is not for me and there goes, that feeling again thoughts creep in my head I'm seeing red snatched the phone out the hand "WUZUP MANE" ???????????????? you been sleeping in my bed while I was gone next thing I heard was a tone next two words, she heard, was I'm gone, Like The Wind! and, now I'm out to kill a fan

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