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life 2 min read 754 views Oct 14, 2016

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throwing up caps where are they now class president hooked up with the class clown pulled over, had a car full caught with a lot of peanuts, pink elephant in the room here comes the bride there goes the groom where's the broom it's dirt on floor stains on rug get the carpet sweeper vacuum cleaner wipe up the blood who's to blame, for the flood see rainbows, in my sleep, counting colors instead of sheep my mama told me you'll never make a lot mamas living on the county no disrespect, you can keep the check pay your tithe to church paying my bills going to work so fresh, so clean hate dirt, on my shirt know no what I mean, put yo hands on me you gonna get this, work... homie don't get yo self hurt, I'm known to cause pain, throw a few stones into a puddle and, make it rain keep it plain, seen like wings on an airplane Cali.. is one great big alley standing in the valley of the shadow of death you shouldn't mess, with those who have, nothing left ready to leap off a cliff into a cleft gramps told me to, write showed me the ropes so I know how to fight told not to choke told me to aim and.. I bet not miss closed my eyes made a wish put a load of faith on it, so heavy have to wait on it stay fast awake slow to rest bench press when it's time to lift it, all I have to do is grip it, throw it over my shoulder and walk like a soldier, when the war is over

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sounds like there should be a dope beat behind this one my poet

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