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life 2 min read 592 views Oct 17, 2016

Poison Drops

I hate Rats, I truly do, Mice are nice but, I hate them too, when I see mice, I take off... my shoe, when I see Rats, I take off,...running that's what you should do, Rats have a way of bring the living b1tch out of you, you may see one and scream, I mean...Its a Rat...right there is always a Rat that can be detected miles away, like a polecat in the country and usually the Rat is always dead, so why is it, that no one smells the Rat? believe me something stinks and there is a hint of rodent somewhere in that stench I do like Dogs & Cats, I mean who would have a Rat for a pet, even if it's one of those beady eyed White ones...It's a Rat, and those cuddly balls of fur, called Hamsters, they too are Rats the difference between the two rodents is you may have a better chance of surviving should you run into one, one night in a New York alley. Rats are not like Cats, unlike Cats who have 9 lives, Rats do not live long or should I say Rats don't have long to live, because, they are Rats nobody in their right mind, likes them, everyone hates them and truthfully we want them to die Rats do not deserve to live, because they are Rats We don't want Rats in our homes, where we eat and sleep why? because they are Rats and we hate them, what scares me about Rats is, Rats do not fear me, I know, I had a fight with one in the front yard one time, actually it could have been a gopher but it fought back like a Rat and that Rat did not back down, Rats are very sneaky and should not ever be trusted, I bet right now, there's a Rat somewhere looking right at you, laughing its little Rat tail off. do yourself a favor, "KILL THAT RAT" or "THAT RAT" will kill you

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hymnagen

Best Rat lyric since "Ben." This some crazy ish, Wize #Respect

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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LP45

OMG! This had me cracking up. Excellent write wize dom. And if you knew my mom, she'd agree with you WHOLEHEARTEDLY. I have t read this to her. LOL! Thank you for sharing this.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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