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life 2 min read 849 views Nov 6, 2016

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I do not need to rhyme to say what's on my mind though I find that I seem to do that most of the time why I don't know it just seems to go with the flow I don't have to be a contender to throw uppercuts and a few combinations that seems to go with my punchy personality and particular occupation what I'm hoping is there is still time because I have yet to write my strongest standout line set the caged bird free I'm hoping there is still time to write my fire next time I have done my best but have yet to do my best work yet not be the best because we all have something to say and shame on those who do not say it words drop like bombs and pens are moving projectiles the right word said at the right precise time can be like stepping on a land mine the mind is one of the most powerful weapons of all time, more potent then them all and the most effective tool we were created to use our minds to think, it through and think our way out, to think things into existence and think things out that's what thinking is about self help, do it your self most of us sit in front of a brain daily tapping on keys, clicking a mouse, asking google things without much of a thought that within us is the same thing in our own database that no robot or machine can ever replace, now think about that and tap, tap, tap

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RonnieL

Dope Dope piece! Enjoyed throughout!

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after vision

my poet, I see that you have the heart and vision of a true poet. we see things in poetry and explain them in the same

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love_supreme

I cant believe I missed this one. Excellent write.

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