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life 1 min read 708 views Nov 6, 2016

The Gotham Truth

Doctor Quinn
fell into a vat of
chemicals to prove
her love to a criminal
Batman's foe laughing
as if it was a joke
then he choked on
the 3 words he spoke
what do you desire most
are you willing to let go
surrendering, rendering
yourself powerless
wrapped in bondage
50 shades of grey
going all the way
insanely, madly drunk
and in love, up in the club
sleeping with the one  you love
addicted to pain, tattooed
on your brain, playing tic tack toe
with the devil XOXOXO
chewing a lump of coal
 to fill your mouth with gold
just to sew the hole in your
torn soul, I've done the
unthinkable, I've done the
unheard of, I have taken the
oath, for love yes I have stooped
that low, love is a drug that
no one can resist, it goes deeper
than a kiss, can feel like a snake bite
before the sound of the hiss
how can something so good
be so insanely dangerous
that in which we idol can
render us consciously suicidal
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Careful... Do not say this oath
thoughtlessly… Desire becomes
surrender, surrender becomes
POWER...do you want this?

 

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Ezell-Dazh

Poignant-Powerful contemplation...of a most severe affection...dope

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diamondtamarac

This is powerful, love it!

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after vision

loving on this my poet, touches the heart of all generations

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