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life 2 min read 437 views Dec 10, 2016

suicide watch...

You used to be my brother, good thing we ain't blood. We had a bond like no other, it was nothing but love. People already knew, when they saw YAL, they saw me too.. 3rd wheeling at its best, *** it, we the crew. You had my utmost respect, my sister loved you to death.. too bad it was literal, but wait we ain't there yet. Crazy thing is you turned out to be a MF dog, slaying hoes left and right, guess wifey had Ya collar too tight. A beautiful nightmare the turned out to be, she left her daughter behind, damn she was only 3. It's like I'm stuck in a time loop from Valentine's Day. She had to stay home with baby Lai, you needed your time to play. Next day erupted, shorty called my phone crying and cussing. She was completely defeated, I could see it in her eyes. The she married, the father of her child caused her demise. She decided right then, I couldn't tell her . She got up, swung her hair.. and bopped to her whip. Ain't here from her in a couple hours, hell I thought she was resting.... now the remainder of this is crazy, so read with discretion.... TO BE CONTINUED

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LP45

Nice work here. Didn't realize this was a part 1.

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Lee-Ann

Thank you

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after vision

like lady didn't realize this was part 1

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