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romance 1 min read 556 views Dec 10, 2016

Our First

This is the true story of my life 

I met a woman who had a child made her my wife

Entering their lives was unexpectedly

 Our chemistry was not based on math it was love heavily

Though we had to hide our relationship through celebrations, birthdays, and holidays

Not a single day went by where we didn't enjoy our life like riding on sleighs

Snowflakes have fallen with different microscopic designs

But the way we hid our relationship was like presents under a tree

Until that special day we decided to become public

Its a relationship our families were waiting to publish

Carried it around like loaded luggage never unopened.

Our love we celebrate like a one of a kind token

Even though our families spoke their ignorance

We didn't care if they didn't accept the difference

Our first Christmas together we invited everyone over and decorated our home in an extreme measure

Everyone surprised by our well decorated Christmas tree

Were every ornament symbolized our family

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tjaigreen

Nice! Thanks for sharing.

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LP45

Very nice work minayaj. Great imagery too. Thank you for sharing.

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after vision

truly a treasure my poet

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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