“Written Thoughts.”

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life 1 min read 517 views Jul 4, 2024

Thoughts Part

I broke down earlier today

Tears escaping the sadness it had to portray

Pain I had to release

Needed my mind to feel at peace

No one noticed as my head was low

The tears and sniffles I couldn't control

My mind was the center of the show.

Thoughts streaming like flashing news

Couldn't select the topic to amuse

As there were too many to choose

These are thoughts, though I can not refuse.

Siting still and weeping in my lonely corner I couldn't put the thoughts in order My mind was still the main performer.

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mlowe5

Yes, minayaJ, parting thoughts always leave keloid memories of grief, joy, or both. One. Peace And Love.

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The Immortal Wize

I know this feeling so well.

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