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minayaJ
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Mother

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Oh mother why can't you comprehend 

The words you release do hurt and offend

Not only do you want respect in the end

Oh mother you were never their as a friend

As a mother you did everything to keep me well kept

Only at night the pillow would know how much I wept

Thought as a grown woman know we would connect

Things still seems the same and my heart needs to collect

Wish our relationship was more than just an argument

You will never know how much I've learn for you it's unfortunate

You never attended any of my activities

But constantly spoke of my negativity

Of my art work with my creativity 

Made me feel like stupidity

Which made me stronger with productivity

Showed me how to hold responsibility

In my heart which is my first facility

 

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW!! I am blown away by this, I have nothing but the utmost respect for those who keep it real about how they feel.

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Ezell-Dazh says:

Touching... inspired by its Ending. 💯

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