“Written Thoughts.”

Site rankMAJOR GENERAL

Awards

Karma 21,000 Blood stone

Poems snapshot

96Total poems
52,378Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
1Last 30 days
1Last 90 days
1Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

life 1 min read 519 views Dec 14, 2016

Mother

Oh mother why can't you comprehend 

The words you release do hurt and offend

Not only do you want respect in the end

Oh mother you were never their as a friend

As a mother you did everything to keep me well kept

Only at night the pillow would know how much I wept

Thought as a grown woman know we would connect

Things still seems the same and my heart needs to collect

Wish our relationship was more than just an argument

You will never know how much I've learn for you it's unfortunate

You never attended any of my activities

But constantly spoke of my negativity

Of my art work with my creativity 

Made me feel like stupidity

Which made me stronger with productivity

Showed me how to hold responsibility

In my heart which is my first facility

 

 

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (2)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in
Contest winner

The Immortal Wize

WOW!! I am blown away by this, I have nothing but the utmost respect for those who keep it real about how they feel.

Read The Immortal Wize 's poems

Ezell-Dazh

Touching... inspired by its Ending. 💯

Read Ezell-Dazh's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free