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life 1 min read 511 views Dec 19, 2016

Alone

Feeling alone out there in the what seems a lonely world

Where no one is walking with you because it's so cold

Roaming  the streets at night

The only things moving are the traffic lights

Eyes become sharp bold and paranoid

Wishing you had a friend like Sigmund Freud

So he study you, that smart neurologist

Free your mind so your not trapped like a zoologist

All you do anyway is hallucinate

View objects in front of you that just accumulate

Attack your mental state

Dont let you think straight

Only with yourself you start to communicate

You try to ask those for help but they don't want to cooperate

Can't believe feeling alone inside it starts to duplicate

A feeling that you can never dominate

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The Immortal Wize

This is deep on so many levels.

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hymnagen

I enjoy being alone but hate feeling isolated. You just took me through both. Tight work

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