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life 1 min read 769 views Dec 21, 2016

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It's not when you're closest to me that proves you're worthwhile.

No...

It's when your presence has completely evaporated from my existence..

And somehow

You're felt more deeply than I've ever known.

It is then..

And only then..

That I know your significance

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love_supreme

I feel you on this one. Excellent write.

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Corey

I sense a journey of regret, honesty and discovery. I love the way this poem made me feel! Great write!

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The Immortal Wize

Very poetically crafted.

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minayaJ

Well put....I am left wanting to know more of this person's significance..Enjoyed it

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diamondtamarac

Love it, written beautifully. I felt every word

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xclusive

I know the feeling too well. Nice write

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