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this pain shall i endure

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in silence, this pain shall i endure

break me, this pain shall not

triumphant shall its pressure

me make

turning coal into diamonds

shimmering and resilient

polished by this heartache

shall i be

in silence, this burden shall i endure

for it will make me strong

i will rise

majestic and true

be the angel

that destiny paved  way

for me to be

in silence, mesmerized you shall be

my fighting spirit

a symbol of hope you will see

for not all champions are rewarded

with silver and gold

low and behold

my reward, the life i live

and the smiles i choose to give

shall be

even when pain, grief and heartache

have me cornered

and alone

in silence, this pain i shall endure

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mlowe5 says:

Wow! I loved the hyperbole that just keep echoing back to me as I flow along, flowing alone rhythimnc ebbs of this cleverly penned piece. Thanks for enabling me to see, feel, and now understand a seemingly projected silence upon me. Indeed you are a rising poet, you, poetunleashed. Thanks for sharing. Write on! Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Poetunleashed says:

Mlowe5 i am truly humbled by the fact you see potential in my work thank you
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hymnagen says:

Very encouraging words

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poetunleashed says:

hymnagen thank you

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