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Natural33
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Intertwine

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I stared into the sky wishing for a sign

The clouds danced around forming a culture of happiness.

The wind swayed back and forth as the birds were in tune to the sounds of the wales.

Swish..... Swish....

The sun rose and filled my eyes with blindness

A blindness that soon became light and then light became darkness.

The stars were a galaxy of dust filling the world with its desires to shine.

However; a shine so dim direction was misguided.

i stared into the sky wishing upon a sign.

A sign so deep, I wanted the world to see.

I stared into the sky waiting...... waiting........ and waiting.

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mlowe5 says:

Clever write. Love the imagery play. Dig deeper as you watch and soon you'll see the sign--waiting on you. Write on my Sister. Let that pregnant poetic mind continue to germinate messages yet to come. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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mrmelody7 says:

Out of this world galaxy poetry a big fan of nature and the Cosmos type of poetry
 

RonnieL says:

Profound scribe! I'm with mrmelody7...love this type of poetry! Salute too you!

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