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life 1 min read 591 views Dec 27, 2016

Don't believe the Tin Man

ample amount of apple
hung in Adams throat
like a choke hold
Eve threw the rock
then hid her hands
acting as if she didn't know
enlightened me please
why would they care about
being naked when they
were the only people
birth from the earth
reversed verse is a lie
that sometimes reveals
the truth, a web of make
believe casted on the
right side, those who are
hung out to dry, too fearful
to not believe, what they
have been told, oh but
blessed are the bold
having the B attitude
to beautify the ugly views
a garden so wonderful
who knew! it was wonderland
Walt Disney, first told  the
world, "There is no God"
he animatedly hid it in OZ

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