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life 1 min read 565 views Jan 24, 2017

Intensity

I hate you
I thought I'd tell you that
instead of holding it in
insane is to pretend
when you feel different within
so I'm being sincerely honest
with you...I hate you
I truly do, I tried not too
the more I tried
the more I lied
why must I hide such strong
emotion, don't get me wrong
I don't wish you dead
I wish you die slow
and painful
I know that sounds so
hateful, I know
maybe I'll burn in hell
I know you'll be there too
my words are true
I hate you, truly I do
there is no one I hate
more than I do you
why am I telling you this
you need to know, I need to
know that you know this
no more holding back
facts are facts
I used to love you

 

 

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minayaJ

feel the pain and anger

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RonnieL

Well DAM! That bout sums it up. Love the description in this. Your talent.....off the chain. Let's keep elevating.

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2b2b2

Violent pen stabbing....superbly captured....whoa!!

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