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life 1 min read 583 views Jan 31, 2017

Dancing

Remember that one song from the group Total, Tripping

That one jam always had my feet moving and body whipping

Left to right body moved

Trying to sing the song like the group I was totally in the groove

The mirror always showed me which moves it approved

Time passes and we forget the fun things done with no one watching

Music that moved us and never left us always had us rocking

Either while you carried a discman, tapeplayer, as you were walking

Watching Soul Train, Video Music Box,  up till MTV Music videos

Dancing around the house like hula hooping thru a cheerio

Mirror and friends always there to laugh or criticize

Had everyone watch your moves like hidden spies

It didn't matter as long as you were satisfied

Well blessed feeling alived

 

 

 

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2b2b2

Indeed....(still do)....ONE

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RonnieL

Flashbacks....cool write.

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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