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life 1 min read 571 views Feb 14, 2017

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you're beautiful
like a steel magnolia
though I may know you
I have yet to know you
you're so awfully giving
you give me the feeling
I owe you something more
than hello and Thank You
for the tender loving care
with you there is
nothing in this Universe
I won't share with you first
if it wasn't silvery of me
I would so gladly hold open
the door and pull out your
chair for you, to sit there
next to me, that's how it
absolutely should be
I just plainly explaining to you
 what I should do if I claim
I care for you, it's like
I can't sing like Gladys Knight
but, you are by far
the best thing that's
ever happened to me
if you read between the lines
you will find, that you're
number one in my book
I could not leave on a
midnight train to Georgia
unless you too, were on board

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SYQ222

Love it!!!

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