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Deep Blue

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romance

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 You met me in a place


where time stood still

 

in profile, a perfect angel

 

though i, had not the will

 

to try, to win you over

 

i had bigger fish to kill...

 

you challenged me, to do

 

the only thing i'd ever known

 


to calm my aching heart

 

took me back through my life

 

 


made me look deeper inside

 

 


than anybody knew...

 

and so did you

 

 


together in a way,

 

we connected the dots

 

 


found an uncertain truth

 

turned yourself inside out

 

payed a higher price than Gold

 

changed the pattern of your pathway

 

so completely, that when you called

 

you touched my life line with your own

 

took my half and made it whole...

 

called me to you... every hour

 

we spoke on the telephone

 

and with reassurance in your voice

 

in a tone steady and sure, gave promise

 

where i had not much left to lose...

 

made your choice, before i ever knew

 

what you had come there for

 

And once again, the lifeboat i was in

 

had fortunes smile and hope

 

for a new journey to begin

 

  ...a worthy prize to win...

 

gave my becalmed sails, new wind...

 

there was no way out...  but further in

 

and without hesitation or uncertainty

 

you took me from the shelf

 

where the pattern of my belief

 

no longer supported me

 

and saved me from myself...

 

something, you would never do

 

  ...for someone else...

 

even though, i never asked

 

this of you, you dared

 

to take a chance

 

when you first touched me

 

i was in the distant blue

 

beyond reach of anyone

 

and headed for a fall

 

i knew was sure come

 

...and i had no one...

 

close enough

 

to bring me back

 

from where i stood...

 

crippled, alone

 

with a song in my heart, i cried...

 

knowing, it was time to lose

 

shed my tears and run

 

i chose between 

 

a vision and my pride

 

so as i slipped...

 

released my grip

 

doing a swan dive

 

surrendered my all

 

fell, twisting and turning

 

you were the focus

 

of my dreams...

 

a way, while i had no means

 

to give more than

 

another task for you

 

to catch Hell for

 

as you, too...

 

were barely

 

hanging on

 

together we dropped

 

further down

 

the well of souls

 

into the awaiting abyss

 

where you caught me

 

did what no one else had ever done

 

met me with open arms,

 

gave me your truth...

 

where i had none

 

with you i feel a song

 

...in my heart...

 

 

C2

 

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