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life 1 min read 571 views Mar 4, 2017

shadows edge

shadows on the edge of fear

is the monster that kills

waiting in dark

taking over this world

like a dagger to the heart

it is the spirit that  it' seeks

the star that shines deep within

hunger for this light

is truly beastly

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The Immortal Wize

Really nice.

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