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life 1 min read 643 views Mar 21, 2017

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so tired of the labels
we are made in the same way
born and die
just a like

Brainwashed
to live a false life

but we keep embracing this lie
don't listen
due to
what they don't want you  to know

you have power within
you are in charge
it is up to you

to make the decision to make it thru

what you don't know
every single thing
has it problems to match its' strength

seeing beyond the blame
and pushing to the other side

we can get by
or we can live a lie

the few hope you never
see the truth

there is a map
hidden within you

to bring about your
intent

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mrmelody7

Nothin like a good personal GPS to guide you and get you where you wanna be

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The Immortal Wize

Very profound.

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mlowe5

Indeed. Labels are made to be torn off/away. Once gone, you are you; free as you want to be! You! Nice write. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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Brownchildt

Your words are Very true.. Nice

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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