Droned
Droned
from youth thru school
creativity locked by the boss
to put a stop to thinking outside the box
instruction to a loss
cyborg in training
free will gone without explaining
“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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Droned
from youth thru school
creativity locked by the boss
to put a stop to thinking outside the box
instruction to a loss
cyborg in training
free will gone without explaining
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Join free Log in2b2b2
Tight Piece....well crafted...thanks for sharing!
Read 2b2b2's poemsmrmelody7
Buck the system the way to go some can not be droned a teacher in high school called me uncouth cause I called her a liar be yourself short with lots of impact nice write
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Powerful delivery!
Read The Immortal Wize 's poemsQ.B.
Most people fit this description, but don't know it. Excellent write
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