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life 1 min read 647 views Apr 5, 2017

Droned

Droned

from youth thru school

creativity locked by the boss

to put a stop to thinking outside the box

instruction to a loss

cyborg in training

free will gone without explaining

 

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2b2b2

Tight Piece....well crafted...thanks for sharing!

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mrmelody7

Buck the system the way to go some can not be droned a teacher in high school called me uncouth cause I called her a liar be yourself short with lots of impact nice write

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Q.B.

Most people fit this description, but don't know it. Excellent write

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