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life 1 min read 588 views Apr 9, 2017

Did I say Maybe

maybe it's like taking candy from a baby
maybe it's like riding ship in the navy
maybe it hurt a little bit more than you planned
maybe it more pain than you can stand
maybe you just need to be understood
by someone who don't understand
maybe you're just slowly sinking in
desert sand trying to reach higher ground
before you drown in so many maybe's
hold on to your own commitments do not
abort your mission maybe you were born
to hear this, maybe you were born to hate this
maybe you don't have the answer
maybe you should step out and fall
if your landing is fatal, maybe you've
done it all, if nothing from nothing leaves
nothing than maybe you should be doing something
there is only one key to success that has been
proven to work and here it is...

"GET UP OFF YOUR @SS and DO SOMETHING"

I don't know,  try it maybe it works.

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