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life 1 min read 551 views Apr 10, 2017

Snow Angels

has anyone died and came back to life
telling us what Heaven is like
or how many degrees burns in the fire
has anyone inquired does heaven have
a choir that sings choruses of what is
desired of us on earth does anyone
remember the tone set at their birth
I guess we have to wait to die to
see with our own eyes what we have
believed and if by chance we were to be
deceived would we be forgiven for
leading so many astray or would
we have to swim the burning lake
it's just a thought we all have been
taught to believe as we do so why
would a loving God sentence us to
a place where there will be gashing
of teeth tormented by a beast it just
seems too out of place to be apart of
space and time that will tell us why

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