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life 1 min read 617 views Apr 11, 2017

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no one will understand but you]
when it's your season to do]
 don't need to explain your reason]
only you can look back and see]
how far you've come]
no one can tell you how you feel]
just nod your head and let thou will be done]
so be it, open up the cage and free it]
this is your life your time take it]
if you can't see the opportunity]
you make it what you want it to be]
these are no secrets if they were]
there would be no success in this world]
fear is the only thing that hold us back]
there's a tale of theses mice and men]
written on a piece of cheese]
[what would you do, if you were not afraid?]
would you wait or would you do it today]
if you're the only one standing in your way]
 no time to Hem and Haw you must Sniff and Skurry

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trent226

I read that book a long time ago.

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haakimuallah

Nice...

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Kavindra

nice write love the play on words very inspirational

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love_supreme

Very nice

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