“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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floating voice sending me to calming seas
tranquility is hard to receive
an ocean of destiny
life keeps beating on down
inhabitants do not conceive
the destruction that they feed
let the rain fall down on me
the sounds of the water beast
keep at peace
depths of darkness
only known
by wisdom's eyes
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One word..beautiful!
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Like the whale you keepin it deep
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