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just different 1 min read 633 views Apr 17, 2017

it's like this...children...

 

the state of the nation

within the nation

presents a dire situation

 

the prize cannot be won

by faith alone—

 

as we face

the rising sun

with eyes

looking home

let not hope

end in fruition

 

but fuel us

in completing

the mission

 

pick up the torch

children

and carry on

 

the finish line

still lies ahead

for those paced

to the end:

 

proud held heads

honoring the flowing blood

the ancestors shed

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mlowe5

Many thanks, love_supreme. Peace and Love.

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Excellent write

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