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life 1 min read 641 views Apr 22, 2017

Angel in the wind

My intro was hard
But the follow up better
Last night on the bus was
A woman with no sweater
And it was cold
She was ashy and it showed
I offered what I had
It wasn't much just a hug
I was wearing a vneck
So it was no secret
Both of us were freezing
That's ok she said come
wrap your arm around my neck
Apart we were cold
Together warm as heck or
H-E double hockey sticks
Two strangers on the bus hugged up
She put her hand on my heart
Lay her head on my shoulder
She told me you're a soldier
I say how yu  know that
She said where your heart once
Warm with love it's cold at
She said let go of the past
you no longer hold that
Her stop came and there she went
An angel in the wind I'm convinced
My life different ever since

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The Immortal Wize

This is one of those poems that you never want to come to an end it's so much warmth to this.

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Ak rio

Yea madebabcouoke typos but it's aight

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Ak rio

*Yea made a couple of typos but it's aight

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