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life 1 min read 563 views Apr 26, 2017

Pass it Down

it's time to go deeper, this life ain't for sleepers

I know you're tired but it's not time for bed

just rest your head on a comfortable pillow

but don't you go too soon, I know you're fed up

but you must keep on getting up, no matter

how many times you have fallen down

the ground is not ready for you

the soil is not prepared because you have to

stay and pave the way, tare down walls

break ground for those who are lost in the rubble

to be found, you can do it, it's in your blood

you're a survivor of the flood, they will hate so

let them hate but what ever you do, don't let them

destoy the love in you, our love is all we have

in this whole world so pass it down but what ever

you do, stay awake don't pass away

 

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Kay ready

Definitely inspirational, Glad I ran across this, this morning.

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love_supreme

Very nice! Excellent write.

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love_supreme

Very nice

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