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inpsirational 1 min read 609 views May 9, 2017

If Heaven Was a Mile Away

My heart aching from heartbreak Doctor saying be patient I just cant All these needles And these beeping sounds Hurt my faith Got me down Wish God would give me wings to fly tf from round here I wana go high So high I cant see the ground there higher than the stars They dont even shine there A world where im always happy A place bad stuff never ever happens A place where we all can be ourselves Lord can I come to heaven To escape to this hell? Btw can my fam come through And all my loyal friends come too I dont want to leave them They are not fireproof But tired too Dear lord if heaven was a mile away Could we all fly with you

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QueenJ

wise words

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LP45

Powerful. An excellent write. Thank you for sharing this.

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