fire
in fire together
raging thru the flames
enduring the pain
heartbeat to tame
free of control
flames move for life
winds blowing the pace
follow thru
till the burn
leads you
“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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Join free Log inAk Rio
Im burning with desire ty
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Mz Lady much as I love music you got me pullin a CD by Pointers Sisters the song fire and a second CD by the Ohio Players titled fire when you hot you hot thanks for joggin the musical memories with this blazer
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Now that's hot!
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