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JustOneStoryTeller
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Just a story teller of life, love, and unpredictable journey as we make our way on our own path of life.

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Deceit

CATEGORY

life

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Over zealous winds

sneak to unveil my private

secrets out loud

but lucky

for me

the clouds wanted

no part of the betrayal

 

©Yvonne Coleman-Burney

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mrmelody7 says:

Yes secrets at times have a way of not being a secret at all A slip of the lip has been known to sink a ship
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2b2b2 says:

Stealth-mode at its finest...well played!
 

KiloMsundrstd says:

Short but can be interpreted so many ways.. great write
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Kingqadardwon' says:

Groovy... Excellent work
 

JustOneStoryTeller says:

Thank you Mr. M. and you know this Man! lol

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JustOneStoryTeller says:

Thank you 2b2b2 Appreciate you!

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JustOneStoryTeller says:

Thank you Kilo, I was hoping someone would see that you hit it on the nail.

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JustOneStoryTeller says:

Thank you King you are awesome appreciate your kindness

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