Taken lil time to
throw down some
simple rhyme
just a few casual
lines
Sometimes they come
out fine
other times have to stop
turn around
but not a bad way
to kill some time
as I toke and sip
some wine
Hello world everything
is fine
mrmelody7
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mlowe5 says: Cute. Enjoyed the read. Peace and Love, mlowe |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank u I call it doodling poetry |
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Charles2 says: Nice wordplay... you play with your words, well... |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank U Sir Charles yeah lots of idle time to doodle |
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2b2b2 says: Indeed mrmelody7...well penned....Happy New Year sir! |
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mrmelody7 says: Indeed Happy New Year NFL playoffs may be good this year am a Raider fan but Baltimore lookin good |
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40 Gifted_and_Classy says: nice. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank U for the read and comment 40Gifted_and_Classy |
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mlowe5 says: Doodle on! Waiting for more. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Well Sir Mr Mellow Fellow you know why I dont post been over a year havent tried cause I dont know why things would have changed there a couple sites I go but I mostly do them in Facebook stories they only stay up 24 hours only friends can see avg about 20 views only got on face book to stay in touch with a brother whose in his makin music thing niece told me he was always on there so I signed up cause he wont answer his phone or return messages it worked fine for about a year I messed up put my picture up Man start get all these friends request from my clubbing days ist cousins kids Isay I aint for all this so do the poetry put up old school music On this old school music site folks crazy bout the music I post |
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mrmelody7 says: Well Sir Mr Mellow Fellow you know why I dont post been over a year havent tried cause I dont know why things would have changed there a couple sites I go but I mostly do them in Facebook stories they only stay up 24 hours only friends can see avg about 20 views only got on face book to stay in touch with a brother whose in his makin music thing niece told me he was always on there so I signed up cause he wont answer his phone or return messages it worked fine for about a year I messed up put my picture up Man start get all these friends request from my clubbing days ist cousins kids Isay I aint for all this so do the poetry put up old school music On this old school music site folks crazy bout the music I post |
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mlowe5 says: I hear you! Basically done with FACEBOOK! Letting friends know. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Never would have been on there but for my brother he lives alone in this big senior living he legally blind so I try to keep in touch |
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mrmelody7 says: Musy say this none of those poetry sites come close to the Vibe as far as talent as far as response as far as subject matter variety I miss it but when you post stuff it dont go through you dont no where it went they dont tell you nothin |
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mlowe5 says: I hear you. I was hoping we would be able to help the Vibe by doing self-publishing with them rather than the present-day "rip-offers". The struggle goes on. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thats a good idea I did mine in 2009 wasnt bad think I spent 2000 dollars for 500 books for another 500 books wasnt much of extra money |
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