Taken lil time to
throw down some
simple rhyme
just a few casual
lines
Sometimes they come
out fine
other times have to stop
turn around
but not a bad way
to kill some time
as I toke and sip
some wine
Hello world everything
is fine
mrmelody7
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mlowe5 says: Cute. Enjoyed the read. Peace and Love, mlowe |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank u I call it doodling poetry |
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Charles2 says: Nice wordplay... you play with your words, well... |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank U Sir Charles yeah lots of idle time to doodle |
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2b2b2 says: Indeed mrmelody7...well penned....Happy New Year sir! |
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mrmelody7 says: Indeed Happy New Year NFL playoffs may be good this year am a Raider fan but Baltimore lookin good |
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40 Gifted_and_Classy says: nice. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank U for the read and comment 40Gifted_and_Classy |
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mlowe5 says: Doodle on! Waiting for more. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Well Sir Mr Mellow Fellow you know why I dont post been over a year havent tried cause I dont know why things would have changed there a couple sites I go but I mostly do them in Facebook stories they only stay up 24 hours only friends can see avg about 20 views only got on face book to stay in touch with a brother whose in his makin music thing niece told me he was always on there so I signed up cause he wont answer his phone or return messages it worked fine for about a year I messed up put my picture up Man start get all these friends request from my clubbing days ist cousins kids Isay I aint for all this so do the poetry put up old school music On this old school music site folks crazy bout the music I post |
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mrmelody7 says: Well Sir Mr Mellow Fellow you know why I dont post been over a year havent tried cause I dont know why things would have changed there a couple sites I go but I mostly do them in Facebook stories they only stay up 24 hours only friends can see avg about 20 views only got on face book to stay in touch with a brother whose in his makin music thing niece told me he was always on there so I signed up cause he wont answer his phone or return messages it worked fine for about a year I messed up put my picture up Man start get all these friends request from my clubbing days ist cousins kids Isay I aint for all this so do the poetry put up old school music On this old school music site folks crazy bout the music I post |
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mlowe5 says: I hear you! Basically done with FACEBOOK! Letting friends know. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Never would have been on there but for my brother he lives alone in this big senior living he legally blind so I try to keep in touchpoems by this commentor |
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mrmelody7 says: Musy say this none of those poetry sites come close to the Vibe as far as talent as far as response as far as subject matter variety I miss it but when you post stuff it dont go through you dont no where it went they dont tell you nothin |
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mlowe5 says: I hear you. I was hoping we would be able to help the Vibe by doing self-publishing with them rather than the present-day "rip-offers". The struggle goes on. Peace and Love. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thats a good idea I did mine in 2009 wasnt bad think I spent 2000 dollars for 500 books for another 500 books wasnt much of extra money |
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Memoir 1 2026 A Soldiers StoryA Fathers day story way back in 1970 I am boarding plane headed to Vietnam after 30 day leave back then the plane bout 20 feet from plane 6 foot link chain fence between plane and wating area Had told family I only wanted Pop to take me to airport didnt want crying scene of sadness As I got 3 4ths up the stairs Pop called my name I turn look he say remember aint no Heroes in the Woodward family I say gotcha Pop A simple way of tellin me go on over there come on back (A Dads Love) My Pop liked listening to my music Stevie was his favorite but his favorite song loved was show and tell by Al Wison take a listen Its a beautiful song  |
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My LifeWhat a cut up event it has been smile from ear to ear turn to grin to grin Name of the game was fun got it done Money never was an issue once you have done the war zone thing lot of stuff in life dont mean rhe same Still havin fun though most friends r now gone still get it done business and fun A favorite song of mine is from a lP I bought in `978 Entire Lp really good Its called 52nd street by Billy Joel Billy Joel jams still have that LP song from the LP is MY Life Being a Vietnam Vet this is one of the songs I played for my generation for me it will always b too much too litte late to pretend u care Enjoy your summer everyone
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