Therealchoc98

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Live

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life

I want to live

I wanna live like no one is watching

like I'm running through the finish line but I'm not stopping

Can I live?

because its like we're just living to die

while time flies upon the sky

But

just want the best

for me and the rest

never been a hater

trust me I'm not a fret

But,

I still live

I'm not a begger

I give.

searching through my thoughts

the only way is positive.

In the end through it all,

I still live!!

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