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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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asked to recite one night stood up

with a tremble in my voice I was a

little nervous of course my throat

scratchy and hoarse turning pages

in the book I was holding all eyes

on me as if I were to perform or something

taking a few sips from a water glass

of spritzer taking a deep breath I let out

a roar like a wounded lion in pain

word for word verbatim vibrating

in epic proportion gripping the sides

of the podium feeling the momentum

the crowd went silent I no longer cared

who was listening to my facet leaking

while rusty pipes were knocking

no longer shameful of the roaches

crawling out of the cupboard falling

into the red Solo cup of beer residue left

on the table next to an open bag of Doritos

the cat was out the bag the dog was

outback tied to a tree the mouse was

caught on a trap the whole house heard

the snap in to deep no turning back

feeling the words coming out of my

mouth cut so deep you could reach in

take an organ out heavily sedated

in a trance the curtains drew to a close

audience in stitches from the incision

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Xclusive says:

Whooo! word play on here is CRAZY! I could visualize what you were conveying as I read. This is a dope piece. Keep the ink flowing
 

SolitudeVibes says:

Yeeeeees the word play is impeccable i felt every word and could literal grasp the visual

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