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lightness in the dark

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through a pane's eye...

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out in the summer’s sun
on a bordering fence
a robin relaxed
while on the inner side
an unknown avian
strolled through the grass...


after pecking here and there
it flew off--
no doubt the drum major
for the tailing parade
who likewise pecked
before taking flight...

a platoon of swallows landed
surveyed and resumed their flight;
a lone Cardinal strutted by
peered through the glass and flew away...


the fence’s parallel pea green flora
swayed in the summer breeze:
a warm rhymical moment
canvased through the opened blinds
of a pane’s eye...

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ladybbugg19* says:

i like this. love the flow of you words

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LP45 says:

Beautiful imagery and excellent wordplay Mlowe5. Thank you for sharing this.
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mlowe5 says:

Ladypoet45 and ladybbugg19*, thank you two Sisters for the read and time taken to offer feedback. Appreciate it much. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, love_supreme. Thanks. Peace and Love.

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